Monday, October 26, 2009

Story Time

After reading in The Cricket in Times Square about how there came to be crickets, I had my students write a tale about how something in the world came to be. Below are three of their stories (no favoritism...just the top three of the pile). The paragraphing didn't come through as intended, but you'll hopefully get the idea:)

Whose Nose Went Flat?
Once upon a time when animals still talked, there was a pig that loved to eat a lot. But he had a problem with smelling. The problem was that he didn’t have a nose. So he went all around the forest.
The first place that he went to was the doctor. The doctor said, “There is a way to get you a nose, but I need 5,000 beans.”
“But I don’t have that many beans to pay you.”
“Ok pig, there is a way for you to get money,” said the doctor.
“What’s the way?” asked the pig.
“Just get a job,” said the doctor.
“Can I get a job over here?” asked the pig.
“No, no, no, no, no, you cannot get any job over here, not even if you clean my room, give me a bath, make my lunch or my dinner, or do something else!”
“Okay, you want me to get a job somewhere else.”
So the pig went to work at a witch’s house for a month and he got 1,000 beans. Then he worked as a cleaner on a ship and got 500 beans. Next, he worked as a dish washer at a restaurant for 500 beans. He also earned 3,000 beans working at a bank.
He went to the doctor and got a nose. But there was a problem. The doctor and the pig didn’t know how to use the nose. They tried a lot of things, but it didn’t work. At last they tried using glue to attach the nose. It worked! He thanked the doctor and went home. When he got home, he realized something was wrong. He remembered that he forgot to give the beans to the doctor.
He went back to the doctor and paid the beans. On the way back, he feel down and his nose went flat.

By Wu Han


Spinning Class
Once upon a time there was a spider named Alice. Alice didn’t know how to spin a web. Her mother tried to teach her how. Instead of teaching Alice to spin a web, it turned out to be a big mess. Alice felt very sad that she couldn’t spin a web.
Then she had an idea. Her idea was to go outside to find her friends and ask them how to spin a web. The first friend she went to ask was the monkey. She asked, “Do you know how to spin a web?”
The monkey replied, “I don’t know how, but cat knows. Ask her.”
So Alice went to cat. Then she asked cat, “Do you know how to spin a web?”
“I don’t know how! Who told you that?”
“The monkey,” replied Alice.
“Go and ask the owl,” cat replied.
So Alice went to the owl. Then she asked the owl, “Owl, do you know how to spin a web?”
The owl replied, “I don’t know how. Who told you that?”
“The monkey said that that cat knew how and the cat said you knew how.”
“Go and ask the lion; he knows.”
So Alice went to the lion. Alice asked the lion, “Do you know how to spin a web?”
Then the lion said, “I don’t know how. Go and ask rat.”
So Alice went to the rat. She asked the rat, “Do you know how to spin a web?”
“Yes,” replied the rat.
“Can you teach me how?”
The rat said, “Yes.”
So the rat taught Alice. Then Alice knew how to spin a web.

By Grace

The Bad Fortune
One day there was a giraffe. He was a normal giraffe and was five feet tall. One day he was walking down the road and saw a fly.
The fly said, “Come with me and I will give you your fortune.”
The giraffe followed the fly to a very tall mountain. They climbed it and at the top there was a big box ten feet tall. The giraffe said, “I want to see in that box.”
Then the fly said, “I will give you a potion so that you can see your fortune. It will give you a long neck.”
The giraffe said, “Yes, whatever it takes to see my fortune.”
So the fly gave the giraffe the potion and he said, “Drink this and you can have a long neck.”
He took the potion and drank it. Suddenly, he had a long neck and he could see in the box. But his fortune was bad and he killed the fly because he was mad. Since he killed the fly, there was no one to give him a potion to make him not have a long neck. And that’s how giraffes got long necks.

By Jon

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